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striped hills


striped hills
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版权: Akihisa Kitanosono (AKITA) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 239 W: 29 N: 72] (2426)
流派: 风景
媒介: 彩色
拍摄时间: 2008-06-19
种类: 日常生活
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
提交时间: 2008-09-05 0:31
已访问: 283
观点: 4
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hills with striped patterns.
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  • fanni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 376 W: 71 N: 628] (2421)
  • [2008-09-05 0:35]
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Hello Akihisa,
so we are neighbours today :)
I really like your "striped" photos of fields and greenery! I like the colours very much. Maybe because this reminds me of paintings which I have not painted for quite a long time: no time for it, taking a photo is much faster... :-/
Very good composition and good lighting! I also like the distant mountains in the haze..
best wishes,
Elena

Good morning Akihisa,
Its a nice landscape, but unattented by TE??
I like the different tones of the green, the slightly more saturation and a not so good depth of field.
You have used the apeertue of 6.3.its correct, but the shot seems to be focused on the left side of the brown strips, as such the eyes parially see the beauty at the background......and here is the point, you need to improve.
Its a good work, but you can improve upon more.

TFS
Rajeev

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