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The Girl who wasn't staring at me
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Une autre photo prise lors du grand matsuri qui a eu lieu le 29 juillet 2006, sur l'une des grandes avenues du centre ville. Au d閜art, ce sont les kimonos color閟 qui ont attir� mon attention. Maintenant, je m'aper鏾is que l'int閞阾 de cette photo est peut-阾re ailleurs.
Version couleur dans le workshop.
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One more picture taken duing the big matsuri of the 26 july 2006, in the big principal avenue of Miyazaki. The coloured kimonos caught my eyes. Finally, the photograph has now another interest.
Colour version in the workshop. |
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It beats me why you chose to convert this to B&W - if there's one thing the original shot has going for it, it's the vibrant colours. Even the guy's dodgy shirt adds a lot to the scene!
Your panoramic crop works well here, and I like the way the man is separated from the rest of the scene by the column.
Normally having so many people looking direct at the camera would be a bad thing, but here I like the strong eye contact with so many players throughout the scene.
I still think you should have posted the colour version though...
Cheers,
Ben
Lunch time?
Super cool this one ,as well the fact is just B&W.
Good job.
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