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Miracle
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版权: Maciej Kozlowski (Yossarian79) (49)
流派: 风景
媒介: 彩色
拍摄时间: 2008-08-01
种类: 自然
相机: Sony Alpha 100, Tamron AF100-300mm F/5-6.3
Exposure: f/22, 2 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
提交时间: 2008-09-06 11:40
已访问: 422
观点: 2
[Note Guidelines] 艺术家笔记
1.08.2008, Tavanbogd National Park, Mongolia - my first total Solar eclipse.
It`s really hard to describe this phenomenon and compare to something but I can`t stop thinking about it.

...it was getting dark, animals were hiding and there was absolutely quiet.

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To ChrisJ: Re:Yossarian79 1 09-11 11:45
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Hello Maciek,
Bardzo dobre zdjecie, az sie dziwie, ze nie masz zadnego punkta?? Mnie nie wyszlo tak dobrze, faktycznie robi nie samowite wrazenie.
Pozdrawiam
Bea

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  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8566 W: 915 N: 11534] (57432)
  • [2008-09-10 18:10]
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1. The circular shape on its own is boring
2. The dark area outside the sun, takes up way too much of the frame, as there is no other focal point, apart from the sun.

Try something like this, next time:

A more impressive solar eclipse shot

http://cache.daylife.com/imageserve/0dRI2fsbubfvA/610x.jpg

And use up ALL of your 20 daily critiques. So far, you haven't made a single, positive comment, on ANYONE elses image(s) despite being a member of TE since February 17!

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