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• siolaw (23015)
• [2006-04-19 10:50]

Hello Tsutomu..
Very nice colors and sharpness..POV is fine...only framing could have been different by not putting the girls right in the middle...think in thirds...
keep it up
all the best
laurent

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• Klapaucius (582)
• [2006-04-19 12:08]

Good sized image. Angle and point of view is okay. I agree with siolaw that you could crop some from the bottom of the image. That would focus the image in more on the girls. Clarity is very good. Well done!

Seeing this image reminds of me of those two girls. I took some photos of them myself... I think I will upload them on here. ^_^ Everyone can see two different views of the same two girls then.

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• emjleclercq (11736)
• [2006-04-19 16:51]

A lovely picture. The grey neutral background make the pink kimonos all the more rich and colorfull.

All the best,

Emmanuel

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• kittyhawk (1668)
• [2006-04-20 9:38]

Hi Tsutomu,

This is a very nice photo, the girls really stand out. You really capured the moment. Thank you for sharing.

- Halgeir

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• Scharan (12314)
• [2006-05-17 0:09]
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• dragonslayero (3074)
• [2006-07-29 5:14]

Hello Tsutomu

What a wonderful portrait of classical clothing, ok so it's more ceremonial now but it's very beautiful.
Nice focus on the girls, maybe there is a bit too much ground just in front of them.
Thank you for sharing.

Odd Jarle

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• tegochu (38)
• [2007-09-18 20:12]

Hajimemashite Tsutomu-san~

Kono kodomo-tachi wa cho~ kawaii desu yo! Pinku no kimono wa hoka no iro yori pretty desu! Haru no kanji desu ne~

Yoropiku!

Natalie

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• elitsa (399)
• [2008-05-11 13:05]

hi Tsutomu,
very sweet image:) you catch nice moment of life! cheers
elitsa