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°æÈ¨: Yitzhak Avigur (avigur_11) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4688 W: 1543 N: 3032] (21146)
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ÅÄÉãʱ¼ä: 2004-06-09
ÖÖÀà: Transportation
Ïà»ú: Fuji FinePix F601Zoom
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/400 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Traffic jam scenes [view contributor(s)]
Ìύʱ¼ä: 2004-06-09 12:40
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I took this shot this morning on my way to work.
It's a ladder at the rear of a cement truck. When I stopped at the traffic lights, and waited for the green light, I saw this truck in front of my car. The Morning sun was very cooperative with my composition.

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  • Nina Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 826 W: 293 N: 100] (4539)
  • [2004-06-09 12:46]

Very nice Yitzhak. It is amazingly good considering how you took it.Well done.

good shot, light and textures are good and I like the diagonal composition (in general, I love ladders, will create a theme)

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  • sunny Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1173 W: 2 N: 981] (3068)
  • [2004-06-09 14:08]

Aa, yes, this is your trademark, Yitzhak! :-)) Great capture of industrial details together with fine light and shadows. The almost duo tones look fantastic here. Excellent capture!

Yitzhak, you mean you saw the rust on the readymix truck and the ladders are just part of the rusty scene?
Nice and graphic, the shadow jaxtaposed is a very neat touch. Cement is very abrasive, and the toll is seen on the drum in the pitting and rust.

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  • Ebbe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2744 W: 780 N: 1924] (9537)
  • [2004-06-09 14:56]

I like the play with te shapes, the ladder and the shadow of it. A fine tight crop too. The upper left made a burn out by the sun, a bit of a pity.

great use of lines and shadows here Yitzhak, the tones and brightness is good here and well spotted too.

Well done

Les dominante de teintes sont trés jolie et donne a ce cliché un aspect particulier ou le rendu est finalement exelent.
Le coup de l'echele qui nous guide du regard sur l'image a été parfaitement vu par contre.
Bravo Yitzhak

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  • Piotr Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1004 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2004-06-09 15:19]

This is example, how creative for drivers are traffic lights. This few seconds was not wasted time ;-) Well done Yitzhak

Yes, this is a vintage Yitzhak shot. Once again your eyes did not fail you spotting the opportunity for an intriguing geometrical play of industrial shapes. The shadow is really cool, and the way you cropped this is just excellent.

Vous avez bien fait de jouer avec les couleurs, les ombres, les formes géométriques pour créer une composition originale.
Très bien réalisé Yitzhak.
Belles et douces couleurs.
You made well play with the colors, the shades, the geometrical forms to create an original composition.
Very quite carried out Yitzhak. Beautiful and soft colors.

Your tones are amazing here: darks and lights contrast well, but also have details showing. Very interesting composition. You always manage to make the mundane engaging.

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  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2979 W: 89 N: 4017] (21378)
  • [2004-06-10 3:21]

Excellent overall effect. I like the shadows and the patterns. You have a knack for spotting these kinds of subject. Congratulations for a good result on this one. You chose the right angle and framed it quite interestingly.

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12806 W: 275 N: 17270] (69562)
  • [2004-06-10 6:37]

Industrial picture with a ladder but without protection. Excellent composition Yitzhak.

Nothing more to add, but a big smile - for the shot and teh quick eye here. well seen!

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  • torben Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 961 W: 331 N: 578] (3074)
  • [2004-06-10 12:03]

You show this world of industrial shapes and mood to full effect here, the textures are dirty and gritty while the lines and shapes are flowing and dancing. The blown highlights are bothering me a little, but still a wonderfull image.

Hi Yitzhak, this one was a real puzzle, before reading your notes, I always try to see first. I like your zooming in on this very much, the (lack of) colors seem to ake it a simple picture, but then the sahdow, and all the lines, make it a very rich, graphic one. Thanks, I like it.

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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 890 W: 247 N: 24] (292)
  • [2004-06-10 15:44]

Ok Yitzhak. Only you can make a ladder and a cemnet truck atually look good ;) Trust me, had i tried, it would look like a...ladder and a cemnet truck, only it would have been boring he he. Great composition. I'm not sure of what it is i like, oh, yes, now i am...It is the corner whree the ladder meets thing going down form th eother "ta"-like thing, and the area around that. I keep looking at that area all the time. Geat use of contrast. It looks very sunny.

Indeed, original idea and very good composition here. I like very much the shadow of thos ladder on the truck. Well done!

A^n excelent team...I mean you and the morning sun. Everything is clean here. Excellent composed with such a good eye, tight crop, the rest is sun affair, shadows and revealed volumes and shapes. I like them all.

What a delightful capture Yitzhak with all those curves, planes marked by shadows. It is spontaneous finds such as this that make taking photos such pleasure. I love the red cap on the tank to the left as well as the pattern on the tank most likely from water. And I just noticed a dusting of cement on the back tank. It reminds me of my days so many years ago as a construction inspector and materials testing techinician. I've climbed over many trucks to take samples for testing, though more likely for concrete than for the cement used to make it. Fine image Yitzhak.

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  • Jeppe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4588 W: 390 N: 4188] (18562)
  • [2004-06-12 16:52]

Very well spotted Yitzhak - I like all the different surfaces with each the own angle - I also like the ladder as "main motif" which adds extra by casting that shadow - very fine work.

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  • jrj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5579 W: 505 N: 7433] (33694)
  • [2004-06-13 5:31]

Very good use of the lines, patterns and the light in this creative industrial shot. Good job here Yitzhak.

Great tones for an excellent composition

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