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FIRST ARTWORK


FIRST ARTWORK
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版权: Partha Pal (partha) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1481 W: 85 N: 1297] (13064)
流派: 人物
媒介: 彩色
拍摄时间: 2007-07-29
种类: Decisive Moment
相机: Canon 30D, 17-40 f/4 L USM Canon
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/50 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
提交时间: 2007-08-08 0:26
已访问: 390
观点: 24
[Note Guidelines] 艺术家笔记
She is a cute Bengali girl. She has just entered in nursery and perform her activities in everywhere. here is one of her paintings she made in wall, probably her first artwork.
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Nice crop of the frame, with the girl on one side. The color of the flower repeats the color of the dress, and I like the fact that only eyes are visible (and perfectly at focus).

Hi Partha,
Lovely picture, very poetic.
Colors are great. Well done!
Regards,
Bea

Hi Partha,
Nicely captured portrait ... I like the positioning of the child and the inclusion of the drawing to fill the space. Well composed ... excellent work! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

Hi Partha,

That is an artwork in itself. Very nice. Great sharpness to it. The hand surprises me in a way. Quite a big hand for such a little girl, but that's also due to the angle of the picture. Nice one.

Greetings, Dennis

Hi Partha,
Very nice portrait of this child, I like the red colors of the dress and flower, well composed.
Regards
Christian

Lovely and gentle shot. Her eyes are brillantly telling in her focus. I like your framing of her to the left leaving the viewer another aspect of art.
thanks
michael

Hi Prtha,
Very nice portrait, Great colours and contrast.Well done.TFS.
Regards.

hAyAti

Hi Partha,
Lovely cute little girl.
Lovely poetic portrait.
TFS,
Corinne

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  • Cormac Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3265 W: 56 N: 6042] (25336)
  • [2007-08-08 17:38]

Great moment, and great capture! The girl in front of her first drawing is a wonderful idea, kind of showing the creator and the creation. I like the contrast between the colour of her and the black & white of the drawing. Also, the fact that she is holding a flower is great too, somehow reminding me of Picasso. Well done!

Hi Partha,
Nice portrait of this little girl. It's well composed and i like the same red tones of the dress and the flower.
A very good capture!
Pierre

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  • mpdre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 270 W: 1 N: 235] (1427)
  • [2007-08-10 4:24]

Hi Partha,
Adorable image of this little girl covering her face with that big red flower, the same color than her dress :) She is definitely showing some talent in drawing. The figure she has traced is complex, I would say Picassian in the form... Really interesting. Very good composition and great colors.
All the best,
Andre

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  • rajju Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 112 W: 1 N: 72] (1221)
  • [2007-08-16 14:25]

framing, setting and composition is perfect..the eyes are shy..the red colours are working amaizing here..
best regards,
raj

It's a different one from others of yours, Mr. Partha. I like the strong crop and idea of half-complex vs half-simple. This one is a bit "modernized" one I saw from you.

Nice day.
Regards,
Huy - from Vietnam

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