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Summer in the city - short break


Summer in the city - short break
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°æÈ¨: Jan jasmis (jasmis) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2931 W: 618 N: 3223] (39860)
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ÅÄÉãʱ¼ä: 2007-07-17
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Ïà»ú: Canon G3
Exposure: f/3.0, 1/13 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Ìύʱ¼ä: 2007-08-08 0:31
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  • ninaL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1811 W: 254 N: 1936] (16185)
  • [2007-08-08 0:44]

Fajna atmosfera, podoba mi sie postawa tej dziewczyny z lewej.

Zastanawiam sie, co dzisiaj wstawic, a wczoraj opracowywalam zdjecie dokladnie na ten sam temat (break in the city)...moze nie jest najlepsze, ale chyba wrzuce wieczorkiem.

Pozdrofka. G.

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  • Booz Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 495 W: 17 N: 155] (10859)
  • [2007-08-08 1:01]

Swietne Janek! - takie Twoje - szum i kolorki sa git!!
Pozdrawiam,
TW

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  • Gerrit Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4340 W: 88 N: 5401] (26795)
  • [2007-08-08 1:11]

Hi Jan,
good atmosphere . Easy going and layed back. The grey and long shadow on the right provide a lot of space.
regards, gerrit

Znakomite. Kwintesencja odpoczynku "w drodze". Cudowna gra światła i cienia, czerni i bieli. I wspaniała ziarnistość. Itd. itp. Jak dla mnie niesamowitej urody zdjęcie - do zakochania. Pozdrowienia T.

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  • jrj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5579 W: 505 N: 7433] (33694)
  • [2007-08-08 1:43]

Well done bw Jan in the strong contrast and hard light. Good interaction between these two fine for the mood captured.

baaaardzo "slodkie"...niczym wizytka w poprawczaku?...
chyba jedno z ciekawszych twoich zdjec, janek, dojrzale jest...
pozdr. j.

Shadow and strong light!!!Great combination between glow and grain too and perfect placement of the people in composition
Hugs

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  • jlynx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 674 W: 79 N: 903] (10389)
  • [2007-08-08 3:52]

Dobry eksperyment, bardzo popieram!
Pozdrawiam,
Jurek

Dear Jan.

Lovely is this placement of characters in frame..
The grainy effect feels the perfect sense of your title..
Composed well...

Salutes,dear Jan.

jean paul

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  • Fis2 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2561 W: 141 N: 1678] (34549)
  • [2007-08-08 4:20]

Cze¶æ Janek!
A ja czekam na zmiane nastroju, bo to wa¿niejsze ni¿ inne rzeczy. Kadr i kompozycja podoba siê Ciekawie uchwycone. A ziarno Twoje...
Pozdrawiam
Krzysztof

Ziarno, ziarno... Z daleka widaæ, ¿e to fota jasmisa. Bardzo ciekawa kompozycja. Nic nie piszesz co to za ma³olaty? Interesuj±ce cienie.
marek

Witaj, Janku!
Bardzo ciekawa grafika, pozostawiająca szerokie pole do domysłów i interpretacji. Głębokie cienie robią nastrój. Podoba mi się ten typ eksperymentów, ale nie mam jakoś śmiałości do wypróbowania go...
pozdrowienia,
Grzesiek

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  • Graal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4877 W: 132 N: 525] (44865)
  • [2007-08-08 23:59]

Typowe dla Ciebie ziarenko no i te zamierzone nieostrosci, w sumie daje to specyficzny klimat, cos jakby fala ciepla unosila sie przed tym obrazem. Dobry pomysl.
Pozdr. Aleksander

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  • berek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3922 W: 172 N: 5107] (23962)
  • [2007-08-09 4:05]

Witaj Jan,
I like this composition very much. great working and result. have a nice day.
B.Erek

Loving you taste for B&W images I don't have had hesitations to open the thumbnail of this other beautiful work from you, really good, compliments.
Ciao
Vinicio

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  • Angshu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5164 W: 175 N: 8023] (26140)
  • [2007-08-12 20:46]

Hello Jan
Love your extreme PP for this B&W. Contrast high, grains high. The placement of the subjects is perfect. A gritty picture from you.
Regards
Angshu

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  • pgorod Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 380 W: 64 N: 307] (1118)
  • [2007-08-27 14:09]

Hi Jan,

this one is a modern poem, written in light and shadow... one of the classiest photos from you I have ever seen on this site...

I love the contrasty B&W and the grain, in fact, I love everything about this photo. Congratulations...

How did I miss them...???

It's your fault...Anyway !!!

Photography...
The real one...
The one that breaths !

j.

Hello Jasmis,
actually looking at your last post I took the link and landed here and I am going to tell you how much I love it! A strong PP on an already strong image for what it shows so naturally, great composition, it's kind of dramatic but maybe as you say, just a short break in a hot day. Great high light from the left.

Happy Valentine:-)
Regards
Michèle

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