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AJJ (4) 2004-06-16 10:50

I just think it is perfect...I love it!!! The yellow tones are awesome

  AJJ (4) 2003-10-12 21:26

hmm maybe it would look better if you could get some more sky and make it a touch more blury

AJJ (4) 2003-10-12 20:22

I would like it better if you would put the background in a blur

AJJ (4) 2003-10-12 20:16

Needs more sharpness and it would look better if the shore on the left side would be a little bit softer like the two in the background

AJJ (4) 2003-10-12 20:12

hmm it doesn't have enough grey tones...and somehow there is no story behind it...hard to tell...

AJJ (4) 2003-10-12 20:10

Hmm...i would maybe go a little bit lower with the angel, that could maybe make it look more interesting and tryed some b&w or sepia....

AJJ (4) 2003-10-12 20:09

If you would have added a photographer Note it would maybe be easier to understand want you wanted to tell through this picture. Hard to see what your focus was on....

AJJ (4) 2003-10-12 20:07

Well I like the idea you wanted to get with this picture but maybe you could get it better if it would be in B&W and you would have captured one of the workers from and different angel, let's say from the front. You should have just played around with the angels..

AJJ (4) 2003-10-12 20:03

I like these daily life photographs a lot, this one looks especialy good because it's like all the people walking by can't see you because your invisible just that girl knew you where there....very good

AJJ (4) 2003-10-12 20:00

Looks really nice, I like the colors, just maybe if you could cut away the street and at some more sky it would look better....