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Ammerschwihr au rythme des saisons Floriane
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2010-03-28 0:34] Wonderful contrast and sharpness! You managed to bring out the few colours that exist in this landscape and turn it into a vibrant and fresh impression.
The road leads the eye into the village, the hills in the background makes a nice backdrop.
Great!
/Helena |
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Ladyfinger_peak zafar7770 (181)
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2010-03-28 0:29] Great depth and sharpness, amazing viewpoint.
You have some really good photos in your gallery, please share your thoughts in your notes!!! :) |
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pytaia Luciana
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2010-03-28 0:24] Wonderful colours! Makes me really want to take a bite of that dragon fruit...
However, the focus and sharpness could have been a little bit wider/larger to show more of the fruit and the hand.
Br,
Helena |
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After The Rain saxo042
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-15 6:09] Hej Gunnar,
First of all, this is a great composition! You really found a good balance between the colourful church, the fjord, the mountains and the lush green trees. The square format works well here.
And second, I was there on the same day!!! However, I was there in the morning while the sun was still shining :D (Didn't manage to get a photo I'm happy with though...)
Thank you for sharing!
Med vanliga halsningar
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when a king drinks wine rexluder
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-13 5:43] Hello,
What a charming and unusual photo!
The wine glass in focus, the tight frame and the iron against the soft and colourful textile makes a nice and well balanced composition!
Thank you for sharing!
/Helena |
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Cobra DavorSt
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-13 5:40] Hi there,
I think the composition is good, but f8 or higher would have added more depth and sharpness to the photo!
But still, a nice photo!
Br,
Helena |
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TRINIDAD GALLERY portimao (45)
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-13 5:38] Hi there,
Great composition! You show exactly the right amount of wall and the car is in the best place to draw the eye to it.
Good shot!
Br,
Helena |
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Gulf of Finland in December DrWu
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-13 5:34] Hej Pekka,
I don't know how to critique your photo...it's simply perfect and beautiful!!!
/Helena |
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Waiting for his tip holmertz
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-13 5:30] Hej Gert!
The look of this man's eyes as he's being caught against the wall is amazing! I bet you didn't dare not to give him a tip...
Good composition and great colours.
MVH
/Helena |
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live together perta (193)
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-13 5:27] Hello,
I really like the look in this child's eyes! You've captured a moment full of life.
The frame is tight and has a very good focus!
Good work! |
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The Shoemaker WepWaWet
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-13 5:25] Hello,
Wonderful colours from all the textiles in the back ground with the boy in focus. The frame is really good.
Thank you for sharing!
Bregs
/Helena |
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The Power of Words macondo
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-13 5:23] Hello,
It's almost as if someone set it all up...
I've never seen garbage and grafitti in such nice composition and nice colours! Vertical works fine here.
:)
/Helena |
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November rain gedul56
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-06 2:05] Hi there,
I'm amazed how you managed to capture the heavy rain! Colours are also nice. Good work!
However, I think that in order to create an interesting photo it needs to tell a story or to consist of different elements that creates interest, depth and focus. I'd be interested to know what story you want to tell with your photo? What do you want to show except for the rain?
Keep on shooting! And thank you for sharing!
/Helena |
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Eastern Barbarian Kevrekidis
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-06 1:54] [ +] Hi Jordan,
My eyes are really drawn to the face of the statue, great use of the golden section!
Tfs
Br,
Helena |
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Cat as god edgarjediza
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-06 1:45] Good composition! Fibonacci would've been proud of you :)
Overall a very charming photo.
Tfs
Helena |
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Pool Sunrise edgarjediza
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-05 23:15] Hej Edgar,
I agree, you were truly fortunate to get this PO!
What a wonderful composition and amazing colours...did you do any extra work with the colours?
Congratulations on your great pic!
/Helena |
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Pottery farukakbas (614)
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-03 3:29] Hello,
Great composition with the man and his earthenware jars. Also the balance between the light and the shades are good.
Thank you for sharing,
Helena |
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Y諶躃 KADINI ydincer (286)
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-02 6:27] Hello,
Nice composition and wonderful colours! I particularly like how you are highlighting the old woman's face. This is a really good portrait!
Thank you for sharing
Greetings from Japan
/Helena |
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Fabrication du Dolo md77 (386)
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-02 5:52] Hello,
This picture really tells an interesting story! The movement and the colours are superb.
If I have to point out an area for improvement I think you could've added a little more space above the womans' head to avoid the impression that she is trapped with no room to move.
Keep on shooting and take care!
/Helena |
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The Birds and The Tree garsh6p (43)
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helenakumiko75
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 3 N: 13]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif) (215) [ 2009-12-02 5:42] [ +] Hi there,
What a charming picture! The black birds and the tree against the blue sky is really nice, also the composition with the line and the birds flying in is perfect!
Thank you for sharing!
/Helena |
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