Photographer's Note
A solitary boat moored in the mouth of the River Eske, Donegal, as the river is soon to enter the sea.
I was on a river cruise for the afternoon, taking in the scenery of this small corner of Ireland.
If I were to take this picture again, I would not place the boat slap bang in the centre of the frame; probably taken on the spur of the moment!
Thanks for looking and keep safe.
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Tue
(92360) 2020-05-08 13:35
Hello Jean,
A beautiful view of this calm lake on a wonderful and sunny day, which actually reminds me of the days I spent in Ireland two years ago. The water reflects the sailboat very nicely and the rolling hills of the Emerald Island make a great backdrop.
Lars
Fis2
(170747) 2020-05-08 13:53
Witaj Jean!
A very nice view, place makes impression.
Good framing, colors and composition.
The boat add flavor to this composition.
Well done.
Nice weekend.
Krzysztof
Ilonka1974
(10289) 2020-05-08 13:54
Hi Jean,
Beautiful picture,
Excellent presentation.
Lovely composition.
Well done.
Best regards
Janusz
PiotrF
(54666) 2020-05-08 15:23
Hello Jean,
A great composition from this place with a lonely sailboat.I like nice reflections, wonderful color and good sharpness.
Fine presentation
Regards
Piotr
tyro
(30513) 2020-05-08 15:55
Hello Jean,
Oh, yes, it is so easy to be wise after the event! I have lost count of the number of times I've uploaded a picture only to look at it and realise that it wasn't quite as good as I had thought it was! But in your case, I believe this photograph is quite delightful as it is.
O.K., the pedants would talk about "rules" of composition but rules are made to be broken. Even so, if you wanted (and you have plenty of pixels here to play with), you could crop off maybe a fifth or a sixth from the left side and that would put the mast of your boat on the left "third" - and that might please the critics, but, quite honestly, I love this just as it is: it's nicely balanced, the light and colours are beautifully soft, your exposure perfect and the details and sharpness are excellent.
Beautiful!
Kind Regards,
John.
Silvio1953
(221593) 2020-05-08 21:53
Ciao Jean, lovely composition withnice boat, fascinating reflections, superb sky, excellent clarity, splendid light and wonderful natural colors, very well done, my friend, have a good week end, ciao Silvio
Nicou
(193806) 2020-05-08 22:58
Hello
quelle vue et cadrage fantastique un bateau seul dans cette immensité un solitaire superbe
Bravo et amitié
Nciou
jemaflor
(147128) 2020-05-08 23:36
Hi Jean,
Nice water mrror, well composed with this lonely boat, interesting option with the boat just in the center of the view, the composition is well balanced with the green on the right side, tfs.
emka
(158156) 2020-05-09 0:12
hello jean, beautiful view of this lone sailboat. Fantastic calm atmosphere, lovely reflections.
Take care
Malgo
holmertz
(102700) 2020-05-09 0:41
Hello Jean,
It's a beautifully calm view of the boat floating among the reflected clouds on a lovely day in early summer.
I agree with John that you could have cropped the boat more to the left side, but also that its place in the middle doesn't matter at all. But generally I think that the advantages of cropping is the most important thing I have learned while being active on TE. Most often I use it to get rid of disturbing details on the sides, but often also to improve the balance of a composition.
Best regards,
John
Royaldevon
(85932) 2020-05-09 5:01
Hello Jean,
Retrospect always makes things seem so easy!
Yes, I see what you mean; it would have been perfectly possible to crop this photograph from the left and remove some of the sky, without losing the balance but it wouldn't necessarily improve upon the atmosphere of utter tranquility, which just oozes from the scene.
Keep safe,
Bev :-)
jhm
(211736) 2020-05-09 9:58
Hello Jean,
Pleasant panorama image with the boat only the lonely
Excellent photographed with original colours
Nice composition and nice presentation.
Very well done, TFS.
Have a nice weekend,
John.
jmdias
(115156) 2020-05-09 12:53
jean
a minimalist compo with two parts of sea, a part of sky and the 2 strips of land and the sailing boat resting as the main personage. well done and beautiful job.
take care
jorge
ifege
(48085) 2020-05-09 21:14
Hi Jean
A very restful photo with yacht and good cloud reflections.
cheers
Ian
alvaraalto
(42804) 2020-05-10 6:48
Hello Jean,
Beautiful photo from your archive of this lonely sailing boat only with its mirror image.
You are right, the picture becomes more balanced and exciting when the boat is placed more off-centre.
Well done!
Have a good week.
Be careful and stay safe, groet Rob
Miguel82
(47110) 2020-05-13 12:28
Jean, this sailing boat was moored at the mouth of the river. The water was very calm here. A peaceful landscape appears around the boat and in the bg. Nice reflection. Fine colors, good sharpness, interesting photo note, regards.
adramad
(72978) 2020-05-14 9:36
Hi Jean.
A landscape that transmits tranquility with those still waters, capturing beautiful reflections, but at the same time a bit of solitude, with that perspective with nobody, only the small boat anchored in the middle of the river.
Point of view, sharpness, luminosity, color and the chosen composition are excellent.
I like.
You have a good day.
Kind regards, keep safe.
Luis.
rychem
(72187) 2020-05-17 9:23
A kind of minimalist shot, beautiful view of the quiet river and the boat with its almost ideal reflections
regards Ryszard
Photo Information
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Copyright: Jean Dwyer (jean113)
(27853)
- Genre: ·ç¾°
- Medium: ²ÊÉ«
- Date Taken: 2013-06-17
- Camera: Panasonic Lumix TZ30
- Exposure: 1/1300 seconds
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2020-05-08 13:31