it's not my fault, a photo from Sharon, Central

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AJohnston (105) 2003-09-08 22:03

Mr. Lavi,
Very, very, very good composition. Depth of field is very good also. I hope you are very proud of this image because you should be.

AJohnston

dovi (1068) 2003-09-08 22:13

Very interesting composition and well executed image!

Darren (6823) 2003-09-08 23:52

Hi Daniel

Very nice composition here, and a very good use of an existing object as a frame. I like things here very much, but I think your exposure is a little overexposed and too contrasty. I think if you waited until later in the day, when the light is softer, the effect of this shot would be even better. If this is close to your home, maybe you can try again just before sunset. Clearly a pleasing shot and a very good idea in terms of composition.

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billyt (101) 2003-09-09 2:50

A nice idea and framed really well, I would have liked the point of focus to have been on the little girl as opposed to the screen, or the little girl even more out of focus. As it is the girl makes it look just like a badly focussed shot. I agree about the contrast it is a bit hard.
regards Bill

zorro (530) 2003-09-09 3:08

very good circle frame and texture...but you better to remove the remaining blue on the lower left.

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joseelias (0) 2003-09-09 9:25

Very nice photo! The colours and DOF are good.
It's a nice composition.

keir (250) 2003-09-09 10:02

The composition is amazing. And after looking a while I think mid/low-f-stop choice was a good idea. Great photo.

Motrem (2392) 2003-09-09 12:38

Excellent composition, thought well as photo.
Excellente composition, bien pens� comme photo.

Luko (14000) 2003-09-10 17:51

While your compo is really amazing here, I completely agree with what Billy wrote about the focus, though there's only one acceptable solution IMO, which was : open wide your lens, the little girl silhouette would easily be remarkable.

Another detail : there's an anonymous hole filled with yellow background color on the left side. It may appear as of little importance, but try to hide that yellow dot and the picture would appear unbalanced with a monotonous foreground pattern.
Leave that yellow color, it will compete with the bigger circular frame, hence balancing your pic with a point of focus on each side of the image.

(That was the 15mn of glory of a little anonymous hole.)

maciekda (19895) 2003-10-15 2:38

what a nice picture, clever compositon, small girl seen through a hole, the angle is good... and the game between red and blue colours.. i like it

Riz (0) 2004-02-15 14:35

excellent framing but I would have liked to have seen the little girl a little bit in sharper focus.

galidana (351) 2004-05-09 13:08

I think that the fact of the little girl image being blurred is one more plus for this composition. She looks as through her own eyes filled with tears.
Beatiful shot and doesn't look to me as a staged one. Or was it?